There are no less than 5 prompt words (pressure – diverse – fragrance – clarity – shock) for this weekly challenge – http://thesecretkeeper.net/2015/09/21/writing-prompt-3/ – I wanted to see if I could use them all in a single haiku. What do you think?
“No pressure,” she lied.
Diverse fragrances shock, awe.
Clarity unfurls.
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I think you did a great job!
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Thanks Greg. Had to go a bit more enigmatic than my normal style, but that’s no bad thing 🙂
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I’m impressed!
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Thanks Teresa. I like prompts 🙂
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Well, good! 😀
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Definitely impressive, Bravo.
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Brilliant! You managed to write a mini-drama with your use of the 5 words. Tension builds. Very suspenseful. Mystery reveals slowly. jk 🙂
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Thank you. I enjoyed the challenge of making something with so few “spare” words! 🙂
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Umm, it’s a knob gag, isn’t it? Or is it just my mucky mind? 😉
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Err… No. Not a knob gag. You know that “there are no wrong interpretations of poetry” -school of thought? Well, I don’t share it! 🙂
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I think it’s splendid.
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Thank you, Meredith 🙂
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