Haiku – “Under”

Shake out the tension
We’re under starter’s orders
No end yet in sight

Feeling underwhelmed.
Like meeting the boy Vader
And he yelps “yippee”

I’m under her spell
That mad voodoo enchantment
We laugh off as love

Written for haiku horizons, with the prompt “under”. https://haikuhorizons.wordpress.com/2015/10/25/haiku-horizons-prompt-under/


10 thoughts on “Haiku – “Under”

  1. I thought it would be kinda fun to mix ;em up a bit…
    I’m under her spell
    We are under starters order
    And he yelps, yipee!
    kinda like a word puzzle… no? (deep sigh)

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