Everything is cyclical
Nothing ever ends
Cyclical patterns loop, repeat
Ends, old; new beginnings
Repeat unto exhaustion.
Beginnings never nearly fresh;
Exhaustion of the soul:
Fresh weariness on everything.
All of this amounts to nothing. NOTHING.
Everything is cyclical…
Today’s OctPo prompt was to write a loop poem. If you want light and comedic, check out either of my two earlier posts today – this one is not for you!
How to Loop 101:
There are no restrictions on meter or syllables or rhyme schemes (YAY!)
BUT we have a few rules!Take the last word of a line. Skip a line. Use that word as the first word of that line.
I know, sounds harder than it is, so basically take the last word of the FIRST line and use it as the first word of the THIRD line. Take the last word of the SECOND line and use it as the first word of the FORTH line. Last word of the THIRD line is the first word of the FIFTH line. And it keeps going on and on like that.
Some people do it by stanzas.
Got it? Sounds fun right!Word Prompts:
Cycle
Transparent
Petrichor- the scent of rain on dry earth
Rarity
I love this form of poetry. Good for you writing about cycles!
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Thanks… seemed appropriate!
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Perfect loop 🙂
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That sounded really tricky but you pulled it off perfectly! 🙂
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Thanks Judy. I tried to keep it simple!
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Or at least make it look simple! 🙂
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Doin’ the hula, hooping with you! OOOOOOO
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“Fresh weariness on everything”–now there’s a fabulous line I wish I’d thunk up first! Great poem, as always, Al.
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This reminds me of Song of Solomon — meaningless, meaningless!
I LOVE “fresh weariness on everything,” so much.
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A loop within a loop.. enjoyed it!
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Great poem AL. I agree , everything is cyclical including pondering on where everything came from and where its going. No edge to the universe!!!!!!!
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Thanks Denis… I feel a poem coming on!
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This looks fun might have a go for the Halloween poetry competition thanks for the explanation.
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Loop poetry isn’t really for me, but I wanted to try it to check… now I know! I hope you do enter the Halloween comp – it’s good fun, with loads of entrants 🙂
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I’m not so confident about writing poetry, haiku has been the limit of my poetic endeavours up to now so we’ll see …
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Nothing ventured, nothing gained… 🙂
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True!! 🙂
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This is an awesome example of the “loop poem” – you really conveyed the message in simple yet so wonderfully effective form Al – well done 🙂
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Thanks, Pat! 🙂
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a clear view is welcome.
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I like your loop example and your explanation–thanks for that –I would add that when I was a child I did experience complete freshness–more of a rare experience these days.
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This is definitely channeling a middle-aged cynicism about the world 🙂
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Oh, I like this cyclical loop…
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