Haiku – From Bad to Worse

No empty comforts;
Her wicked lies in my head
Melting my resolve

The space she has left…
Home comforts melt into air
As I head for sin.

Within her black heart,
Only evil. No comfort.
Her mind void of good.




Written for secret keeper’s weekly prompt, using five words:

15 thoughts on “Haiku – From Bad to Worse

  1. It was great to see a deeper poet reveal himself. The words carried that feel. You did a fantastic writing job fitting in the 5 words in such a meaningful way. I loved your spreading them throughout the three stanzas in the manner you approached the subject matter. – jk

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