I’m bewitched by those entrancing blue eyes
Deeper than seas, brighter than skies
If there was a doubt
You’ve cast it out
And your love for me is the prize
Written for: https://mindandlifematters.wordpress.com/2016/01/15/limerick-challenge-week-3-magic/
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That’s a cool take on the limerick form! The title Bewitched makes me sing that old ditty (“…bewitched, bothered, and bewildered am I…”). 😉
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I put a spell on you… 🙂
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That sounds like yet another song…uh oh! 😀
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There was an Irish band who were famous for five minutes over here in the 90s, called B*Witched… you’re lucky I’m not quoting their stuff!
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Hahaha! We’ve got plenty of flash-in-the-pan bands (one hit wonders) with bad lyrics over here in North America. I’ll bet B*Witched’s lyrics are a riot. 😀
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This was their highpoint…
Say you will say you won’t
Say you’ll do what I don’t
Say you’re true, say to me c’est la vie
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Well, it’s not Alexander Pope or anything… 😉
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faithful, look into my eyes ~ therein, the staircase to the skies ~ freedom we seek ~ love’s truth to speak ~ this way there can be no lies
(this limerick thing is fun) (uh oh, could there be a new book in my future???)
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Sounds awesome… Let me know if you want a co-author 😉
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Well, my muse… I just wrote my evening offering (changing a couple things here) and about to publish on my blog.. Of course I am leading everyone right back here because YOUSE, MAH-MUSE!
Now, on the thought of co-authoring… that could be fun 🙂
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Well, I was already thinking of following your lead with some published collections of haiku and other poetry… so let me know! 🙂
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Let’s rock and roll
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I love this thread of conversation! ^^ Good luck with that!
And I simply love this limerick. It is beautiful. A joy to read. The eyes I lose myself into aren’t blue, but I could really feel the same thing in your poem as when I look into these eyes…
Thank you.
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You’re most welcome 🙂
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Wow. Short and enticing ☺
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Thank you 🙂
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I think you and Annette should definitely co-author a book! 🙂
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I’ve been doing my research into self-publishing on my own recently, so this would fit in with that perfectly… tbh, it just sounds like a fun thing to do!
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go for it, and I wish you all the best with it 🙂
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Thanks Judy :-))
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Bewitching blue eyes, indeed! I love this limerick! Really cool!
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Thank you so much! 🙂
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