Sobbing in the dark
Waiting for the final sleep
To set my song free
Picture credit: flickr.com/photos/stuant63/2255781557
Written for: https://haikuhorizons.wordpress.com/2016/01/24/haiku-horizons-prompt-sleep-2/
Sobbing in the dark
Waiting for the final sleep
To set my song free
Picture credit: flickr.com/photos/stuant63/2255781557
Written for: https://haikuhorizons.wordpress.com/2016/01/24/haiku-horizons-prompt-sleep-2/
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I feel this …
Nicely done
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Thank you 🙂
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Very welcome
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I hope this wasn’t actually plaguing you! I know many who can relate. :}
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Was written in a dark place last night… wait for this evening’s limerick … much lighter and sillier!
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🙂
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I was there last night too…
Hoping tonight is a better one for both of us 🙂
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Fingers crossed 🙂
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All that hurt and pain, I hope the song found freedom.
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Oops published too soon. I also wanted to say it was an excellent haiku!
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Thanks Sue 🙂
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Dark and light, Al. This is a deep one with a couple different ways of reading. Well done.
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Thank you 🙂
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Great haiku Al, one I can definitely relate to. x
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Sorry to hear that, Judy x
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Powerful 3 lines! Love it.
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Thanks Bekkie 🙂
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I dub thee, Good Sir Knight Nabisco, for your ability to create Oreo haiku so masterfully! We enjoy both the light and the dark at the same time! Well done.
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And there was me thinking it was just dark, but beautiful… 🙂
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What a striking haiku … it has a universal quality about it I think … which makes it a really great haiku! Well done indeed! 🙂
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simple and nice 🙂
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🙂
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