I tripped into love
Lust’s fire bounded within
Her river-melt eyes
Written for secret keeper’s weekly challenge, using the prompt words – trip; fire; river; eye; melt
https://thesecretkeeper.net/2016/04/25/weekly-writing-prompt-34/
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Tripping into love is often how it happens 🙂
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I agree. And then, once you’re there, you realise how lovely it is and you can’t help but jump again with both feet 🙂
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Ha ha. Wonderful, Dawn.
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yet so true 🙂
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Loved this! So deep!
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Thank you, Alok ❤
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Oh, how lovely this is. You managed to use those prompt words perfectly, Al 🙂
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❤
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Puts me in mind of the line from the Joni Mitchell tune, “River” where she says, ..”oh I wish I had a river, I could skate away,on” ❤
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I don’t know that one, but it sounds perfect ❤
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Excellent job using the words – wouldn’t have guessed you “had to” use them.
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Thank you… as soon as I read the words, I had an idea for this haiku… all seemed to work out well 🙂
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Yes, it did!
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It’s interesting that you excel at love and zombie poetry…seems like different ends of the spectrum, so I applaud your talent to corral both!
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It’s just because I LOVE the ZOMBIES! 😀
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Hahaha!
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A great haiku Al for these beautiful blue Irish eyes?
Also I had a zombie moment for you when I read this
fiery
eyes melt like rivers
zombie love
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Ha ha! All this zombie-ing is infectious!
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