Note from AL – I started this as a one-off 99-word story a few weeks ago – https://altheauthor.wordpress.com/2016/06/02/99-word-story-the-farmhouse/ -, but some people were interested in hearing more, so this is a continuation. Each installment, if there is further interest, will be exactly 99 words 🙂
Georgie Goodman slumped before the mirror, sobbing. She’d gone to such an effort this evening, not that her good-for-nothing husband had even noticed. She’d tried, really tried, to re-connect with him. He’d been so distant these past few months, his mind always elsewhere, not even wanting to share a bed with her, and when he did he just stared at the bloody wall.
Mascara streaked, in heavy black tears. She tore off some cotton wool to clean herself up, wiping away the make-up.
“What was that?!”
The wall rumbled deep, and removed its make-up too. There was a door…
Ah… this is perfect. You really have to keep this going now. Really. You do. What’s in there? Maybe it’s a zombie. 😉
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I was wondering about that too! 🙂
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Something… evil…
🙂
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So I’m in there??
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Laughing!
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Haha! Something even worse 😛
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You’re in there with me??? 😀
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That’s right. Double evil!
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Evil is more fun than good… usually… 😀
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Nice work
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Thank you… am looking forward to opening that door 🙂
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Intrigue upon intrigue!
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All will be revealed… in time 🙂
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This is catching, Al. I think I am going to write a PC 99 story. I’ll think about it!
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If it doesn’t show, I love the 99 word story format! It’s just long enough to tell an actual story, if the language is super-tight. It can get addictive… 🙂
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That’s why I like Flash Fiction: a slightly elongated prose poem with a tight narrative sequence and enough room for poetry.
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It made me want to cry too, as it hit a bit close to home.
But… I love the suspense!
Gotta keep writing more Al!
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Maybe I will… (he said, trying to create suspense, but blatantly plotting more!)
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Hahaha! I love that you’re so easily swayed 😉
XO
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I like to let people believe that, while doing exactly what I wanted to in the first place! 😀
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And I like letting you believe that I wasn’t aware that’s what you were doing in the first place 😉
:-*
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And the perfect dance continues! 🙂
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Exactly! 🙂
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Well, you can’t stop there! You know, this is how books get started…
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Haha! This is how poets trick themselves into starting books!
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Cool, can’t wait for you to continue!
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I’m sure it won’t be too long… (not that I’ve written it yet!) 🙂
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Ohhhh!
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And maybe later, aarrgghhh … 🙂
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I’m thinking so
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We’ll see… 🙂
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Please… go on! 🙂
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I was hoping for a continuation of this! I felt sorry for whatever is waiting behind that door in the first story, but maybe now it’ll finally get out (or at least a bite to eat).
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Oh, it’s coming alright! 🙂
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oh you tease…
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Not really… 99 words is just about the limit of my attention span these days! Oh look, a sparrow 🙂
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Ha!!
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Ooh, talking walls…. I’d take my mascara off if a wall started talking to me, I’ll tell you…
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So… You’d leave the mascara on for silent walls? 😛
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If I answered that, I’d have to kill you…
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😀
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You should definitely continue this as a series! I’m hooked!
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That’s the plan! 🙂
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Yessss! Keep going! You’re stringing us along wonderfully! 😃
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Haha! Where’s it all going though? (I have no answer to that. Yet 🙂 )
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oooh, intriguing! 🙂
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😀
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Was the husband possessed? Was he mutating after being infected by whatever is behind the door? Creepy!! I love it!
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I love the way your mind works! ❤
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Ha, ha! 😉
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loved this one! Would you mind checking my blog? I am a storyteller too 🙂
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