Standing on the cliff edge
Scales fall from my eyes
Day’s mist recedes
With loosening of ties
A foot extends forward
Dares the earth to meet it
Bring its fury to me
Rising up to greet it
A moment’s hesitation…
The whole truth crashes in
The things that matter most
What I’d lose, and win
I recoil in horror
Heart pounding through my chest
With the certainty of knowing
What needs to be addressed
So if you’re struggling to see
The heart’s wants on your face
Step up to that edge
But take not another pace
Picture credit: flickr.com/photos/abhishek047/15897915815
Very profound and intense poetry Al.
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Thanks Denis 🙂
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Intense is a good description. Thoughtful, too. Hmmm.
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Thanks Meg. There’s a limerick coming on Monday… More like business as usual 🙂
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I look forward to it! Missing you here! Alls well, I hope?
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Yeah I’m good thanks. Just a peek over the edge for me was enough!
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Eeek! 😱
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Exactly… Am not good with heights!
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This is deep. Good one.
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Thank you 🙂
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I love this, Al.
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Thanks Rita ❤
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You expressed that one really well, Al. I think we have all peaked over the edge and had our heart pounce like crazy at some point!
Liesbet @ Roaming About
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I think we all need that peek now and again 🙂
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Intense poem, Al. A cathartic moment. I think often it’s at our lowest that the mist clears and see what we’ve been missing or what’s been there all along. ❤
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Trying like hell not to go there!
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Understandably so! Hugs ❤
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After I wrote that I reminded myself it’s not always about me, is it? Lol. It was great poetry!
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If it evokes a reaction, that’s all I can ask for 🙂
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🙂
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Well… beautiful wings you are growing… Let ;em catch the updraft and you’l feel right at home in no time. ❤
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Thanks Annette – just retrieved this from my spam folder. I fully imagine you are now singing the Spam Song 😀
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spam,spam, spam, spam, spam, spam… uh yes, I am belting that bad boy out! used to love me some spam… these days, not so much, I just love singing about it… (I am so far off track here) U R welcome, by the way 🙂
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Oh yum, something to fry up with eggs for supper… thanks! 🙂
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Al, this is a fantastic poem…to the precipice but not one more step. Love it it. 😀
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Thanks Annika ❤
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I got vertigo just by reading. Well done, it’s great.
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Thank you!
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This is a perfect expression of being on that edge. Scary and sad, yet more hopeful in the end. I think sometimes we need to get here to get out of it.
I could never literally be on the edge… I am ridiculously afraid of heights. I think my parents scarred me for life when I was very young insisting that I look down when we visited the Empire State Building! Now, I really don’t even like standing on a stool. 🙂
Happy to see you here! Hope you’re well and feeling less overwhelmed. 🙂
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Thanks Sandra. Getting there ❤
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This is beautiful and poignant. Sometimes we need a step to the edge to understand what needs to change and what we want out of life. Wonderful poem! 🙂 Glad to see you. ❤
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Thanks Vic – found this in spam after you prompted me. I’m still around! Expect to see a little more of me next week 😀
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Thanks for rescuing me! 😀 Yay! I’ll be glad to see you.
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I’m a sucker for a good rescue!
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I haven’t been around WP for a while, and every time I came back for an instant, I’ve wondered ?Where’s Al? Hope he’s well!’
This poem… well… this is something that speaks to me, profoundly.
On many levels.
The actual ones, those times when I did contemplate ‘jumping over the edge’ (though for me it was more lying under a train or hanging from a hook, yeah, gloriously glamorous and joyful comment I’m making, isn’t it? Sorry about that!).
The virtual ones, when I took a step and hoped mot to crash to my spiritual death down the path. I’m still standing, so… I guess the crashing is not meant for just now 😉
Sending hugs Al, maybe because I could use them myself? Yeah, I’m a selfish one, I am 😉
XOXO
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Happy to share those hugs! (Just retrieved this from spam – WP has been a little over zealous with a few bloggers this week) ❤
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I understood that from reading some other comments. I guess that’s what happens when you leave it too long without posting ;-P
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It happened to Annette too, who pretty much lives in blogland… don’t waste time analysing the weirdness of WP!
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It was just my feeble attempt at luring you to post more 😛
I’m not trying to analyse anything any more. Just went to check that MY spam folder is clear 😉
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Oh, Al, I love this so much. Thought-provoking, excellent advice. 🙂 How are you?
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Back from the edge. Thank you ❤
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Good to hear!
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Thank you… some times you’ve gotta go there to come back 🙂
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Neat: two steps back and one step forward, please … I have always been chary of the cliff edge … comes from living in Gower …
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That makes sense… being Gloucester-born, they hold more of a fascination for me, being the occasional treat!
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I remember all the gliders taking off from the escarpment above Stonehouse.
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I remember playing in (sliding down) the quarry at Robinswood Hill as a child… that was about the closest I got to a cliff in my home environs
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Birdlip Hill … there’s no wolds like the Cotswolds …
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And the Air Balloon pub… happy memories 🙂
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I have teetered on the edge a few times, and it is not a good place to be!!! Love the way you have expressed it here Al 🙂
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I think most people get there at some point… the important thing is to step back! 🙂
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Definitely 🙂
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amazing!
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I LOVE what you’ve done here!
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Thank you… every cloud and all that 🙂
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