It seems a conventional thing
But our courtship began in the spring
With chocolates and posies,
A dozen red roses
And brown paper gifts tied with string
In summer, the temperature rose
Which required the shedding of clothes
And it has to be said,
We spent days in bed…
Funny, the way that love grows.
Fall saw the first cracks appear
She’d cry when my family came near
And my very best friend
Drove her half round the bend
Which led to some fights and some tears
In winter the fights only got worse
And I started to think we were cursed
For all of that love
Just wasn’t enough
When your evenings are sullen and terse
Now, hindsight’s a wonderful thing
And it takes work to make a soul sing
But I’m not ready to quit…
I think she is “it”…
Let’s see what our second year brings
🙂
Written for: https://mindandlifemattersblog.com/2016/09/24/limerick-challenge-week-39-seasons/
So adorable! What a trooper…
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Were you expecting a different direction at the end?? 🙂
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Well, glad they hung in for a WHOLE year! 😉
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It can’t be summer ALL the time! 🙂
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Well, dammit, it should be! 🙂
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Haha! It’s all about the balance ❤
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Yes, and agility and stamina and opportunity😂
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Haha! Cheeky… I like the way your mind works!
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Why thank you, Mr. Lane!
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(bows courteously, kissing your hand ) x
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Wow! Five stanzas for all four seasons! Brilliant! Nice to have you back Al! 😀
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Thanks Meg… there’s another one coming tomorrow too, doing all four seasons in one! I liked the challenge of this prompt 🙂
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I fumbled on this one. Too fixated on Autumn I suppose. Oh well!
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It is the best time of year…
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I agree!
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Yeah, sell the extra people for pocket money and stay the course! By the way, well worth the wait.. However, this doesn’t mean we really want 8 weeks in between posts… just sayin’ ❤
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I’ve scheduled posts for the next two days… beyond that, no promises! (But it won’t be 8 weeks 🙂 )
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I’m just messin’ with you… I’d wait eternity… kinda sorta… cause I have vacuum sealed bar be que sauce! 😉
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But when the hot sauce runs out, so does your patience, right? 😉
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Oh, the hot sauce NEVER runs out…
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Haha! ❤
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SO good!! I love this!
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Thanks Vic… this one came together pretty quickly. That’s usually a good sign with me! ❤
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Yes, I love it when things flow out.
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Some things are better not forced 😉
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I was so not being dirty but I see where your mind is. 😉 hee hee!
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Me? *flutters eyelashes innocently*
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Yes you, Alistair! A dirty mind and a heart of gold. 🙂
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Haha! You got my business cards then 🙂
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That’d be an awesome business card!!
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Wouldn’t it just!
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I loved watching this story unfold Al. Thank you for sharing your gift!
I haven’t written poetry in ages. I guess I’m just not inspired at the moment…
One of these days 🙂
You almost make me want to break that spell 🙂
XO
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Thanks Dawn… just relax and let it flow… 🙂
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I know. It’s the inspiration, the will to sit down and let it flow that seems to be lacking lately.
It must be said that I’ve been doing A LOT of other things that required me to be very focused, and not letting flow at all. I guess that impaired this. Sigh!
Hopeful for October though 🙂
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Fingers crossed. I think the biggest harm to my blogging was caused by stopping travelling on a bus to work… I no longer have an hour a day to just let my mind wander!
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I think for me, it is because I am finally doing what my therapist told me I would need to do at some point: telling my story in my native tongue, discussing all these feelings in emotions with my love, not so much on the blog any more… Can’t say it feels bad 😉
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I’m happy for you ❤
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Thank you 🙂
❤
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This is wonderful… a whole story… glad they’re sticking it out int he end… Always the rough patches, but if it’s worth it, you get through. All that being said, I’d be fine in your spring and summer forever. 🙂
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Who wouldn’t! 😀
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This is so sweet and adorable. 🙂
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Thanks Rachel ❤
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Lol, love this!
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Thanks Zoe ❤
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Lovely and poignant. Naturally, the next season is spring 🙂
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Spring’s a little showy for me 😉
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Ha ha ha. Okay then….
When cold weather blows and hovers
We snuggle deep under the covers
Warm cosy fires
Ignite our desires
Winter is perfect for lovers
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Oh, that’s wonderful! I’m out of a job! 🙂
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Not!
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Haha! ❤
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I love it! You’re keeping it real––good for you. Relationships are HARD and need lots of work but if you feel that she is the one it’s well worth the effort. ❤
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Very true… not something that’s often put across in limerick form, either! 🙂
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True! That’s why you’re the best. 😉
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Aw… ❤
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What a great write on the seasons. Wonderful to read this. Good luck with the second year.
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Thank you, Mother Willow! 🙂
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What an engaging, realistic love story told in limerick form! Fantastic.
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Thank you, Magarisa ❤
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My pleasure! This was a delightful read. 🙂
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Lovely, I loved the final verse in particular 🙂
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Thank you so much 🙂
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It was well worth the wait. This is divine Al. Never let work get in the way of poetry (but don’t tell the boss that!)
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Haha! I don’t think my boss has much poetry in his life… perhaps he needs some? 🙂
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Perhaps you could drip feed him. Slowly, slowly……!
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🙂
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Wow, that is a beautiful story in five stanzas of limericks. I almost thought that winter would mean the end, but so glad he decided to not call it quits! Love this! Great to have you back in the challenge Al!
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Thank you so much… I do enjoy this one! ❤
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All relationships face challenges and have to be worked at. I have never trusted couples who claim they “never fight”. I always think: “what’s wrong with you?” How can you be together and not have disagreements if you TRULY care about each other?
Why am I rambling on? I don’t know, but you quite clearly made me do it 😛
I enjoyed this, anyway 😉
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Haha! You’re always welcome to ramble here 🙂
I thought I’d write a “true” romance with this prompt. If two passionate people meet, there HAVE to be sparks!
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Whimsical! So well written. Love it!
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Thank you, Imperium. Most generous!
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