This is the second in what will inevitably form a Halloween trilogy, concluding tomorrow… I am going to perform these poems, with others, at my first ever poetry performance (excluding open mics) this weekend. Wish me luck!
I met her in a graveyard
On a dark and stormy night.
Wrapped in blackest midnight
She was something of a sight.
Her skin was pale as moonlight.
She’d dark circles round her eyes.
Her countenance was serious :
Quite incapable of surprise.
Her long black skirt hid her feet,
She seemed to glide across the ground.
Made no mark upon the floor,
Moved without a sound.
She made a beeline for me,
As I was drawn to her.
Mesmerised by each other,
Quite forgetting who we were.
Neither dared to touch the other,
To break this moonlit spell.
This eeriest enchantment
That makes two hearts compel.
Standing, still not touching,
We danced upon the mist,
The tangled trail of eddies,
The only evidence of our tryst.
Our bodies now moved closer,
I moved in for a kiss…
But I fell and passed right through her
Denied that mortal bliss.
For though I was but the ghost
In a delicious irony
I fell so hard in love with her
It’s her that haunted
Me
So if you’re sat there lonely now
Sad, and praying for a date
Remember well this poem’s words:
It’s never too late
It’s never too late
Oooh, love this one. Nice rhythm to it and oh so sad. 🖤
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Sad, or wistful, or even hopeful? Will let you decide… 🙂
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Gave me hope. Live right around the corner from a graveyard. Now, what did I do with that long, black dress…
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It’s never too late… 😀
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Nice – and good luck!
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Thank you, Dragonfire! Cool name btw 😀
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Thanks! 🙂
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Love it!!! Have fun at your reading. The crowd is lucky to have you.
Jo-Ann
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Smiling… You haven’t heard my closing piece yet… You may yet change your mind!
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You’re such a tease.
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Haha! You have no idea! 🙂
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You are such a tease.
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I loved the twist at the end.
And you’re right: it’s never too late!
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Sorry, my fat fingers sent this temporarily into the junk folder! It was “never too late” to retrieve that, either 🙂
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😄
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Wonderful, Al. The only thing I would change is in the part
“Our bodies now moved closer,
I moved in for a kiss…”
I would change one of the “move” words, like “Our bodies now drew closer” or “I leaned in for a kiss…”
Merely a suggestion, though. 🙂
Good luck tomorrow!
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Good suggestion, thanks! A poem’s never entirely finished 😀
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It is never too late indeed! Good luck this weekend Al, but I am sure you will go down a treat! 🙂
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Cheers… we’ll see… I’ll settle for at least a glorious failure! 🙂
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You will not be any sort of failure!!!
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Total failure is always a possibility with live material… That’s part of what makes it exciting! (By which I mean the nerve shredding fear I feel beforehand…)
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I can imagine how terrifying it would feel beforehand, but how exhilarating it must be if you are a success!! 🙂
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Exactly… It’s quite addictive!
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Hi Al! Didn’t know you were back. Loved your ghostly, love poem. Good-luck with your poetry reading. 🙂
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Thanks Olga… I’m sorta back… Back-ish! 😀
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Bravo Al. Good luck with the performance.
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Thanks Peter… It’ll only be the biggest crowd I’ve ever played to, none of whom are there for poetry…what could go wrong?? 😁
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If they start throwing pork scratchings, save some for me!
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Pork scratchings I can cope with, but thanks for offering to take that particular bullet for me!
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sweet philosophy, and I was about to make some facile compliment though of course, in accordance with custom you do need to work on structure, rhyme, meter…
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So, apart from my choice of words, and how they are arranged, the rest is tolerable, right? 🙂
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Passable old chap. Hope the performance is ok and if it’s rubbish well you may be able to make a ratatouille from what’s thrown at you #takethepositives
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Passable… A high water mark in praise, surely!
It’s a strange disincentive to do well… If it goes well, I get a warm and fuzzy feeling, but no food. If it goes badly, ratatouille… A dilemma…
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Go with the calories
Like toilets never pass an opportunity…
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Take on and unload at every opportunity… ah, the old SAS training comes flooding back…
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Another Halloween poem. I’m so glad you’re performing these; that sound’s like a blast, Al. You’ll do great. What’s not to love. 🙂
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Thank you… hope you’re right!
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awesome! and good luck!
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Thank you so much!
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Al, Al, Al!
Are you there?
Did you survive?
I’ve been scouring the Nottingham Post for your obit!
I did read something about free Ratatouille in the square.
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Haha! Yes, I survived thanks 😀
Will have to do a full blog post on it at some point. It went well, but *perhaps * the mankini one was a little much for the older audience!
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Hi Al! I LOVE it! It’s sad but also hopeful with it’s message. How was the performance? I’d love to see it. Please tell me you video taped the thing. 😉
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It went well thank you…Couldn’t record it though, as it was set up as a two hander between me and another poet… I’m doing another open mic tomorrow (and Thu actually!)… Will see if I can get something from one of those! I want to blog about the experience anyway at some point 😀
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That would be great. I look forward to it. 😀
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This is one of the best pieces I have read since I returned.
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Really? Thank you so much!
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Well penned and great subject matter Alistair. i hope this piece went over well at your reading.
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Thank you, zaroff. Yes, this went over well… It’s one of my favourites 😀
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