Down in love’s playground
All relationships captured
In childhood amber
Here, giggling on swings
One pushing and one kicking,
Never together
Here, on climbing frame
A mad scramble to the top;
King of the castle
Here, swooshing down slides
Patiently waiting their turn
For such fleeting joy
Here, merry-go-round
Spinning faster and faster
Out of all control
Here, levered see-saw
Where, for one to touch the sky,
One must hit the ground
There, the lucky ones
Dusty knees in the sandpit
Building together
Picture credit: flickr.com/photos/antonymayfield/8465049007
Love this.
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Thanks, Rita ❤
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My pleasure
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Aww, JP and I were just at the park yesterday afternoon and he was totally bummed there weren’t any other kind there! Very sweet imagery ❤
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Playgrounds have some great imagery and emotions attached to them… It’s fun to tap into that 🙂
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I remember those playgrounds oh so well … brings back memories.
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Happy ones, I hope. A time of great freedom! 🙂
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Indeed they were: me and my doggy … I must have been about four or five and he went everywhere with me. The streets and parks were safe in those days.
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Halcyon days 🙂
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Very sweet! And the image so nostalgic! Love it!
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Nostalgia ain’t what it used to be… 🙂
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Well played, sir!! ❤
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Thanks Annette! ❤
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A wonderful metaphor, Al. My favorite: “Where, for one to touch the sky,
One must hit the ground.”
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Thanks Diana… much truth in there, I feel 🙂
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“All relationships/ caught in childhood’s amber.”
What an incredible image!
Love the poem.
Jo-Ann
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Thanks Jo-Ann ❤
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Awesome.
Here, levered see-saw
Where, for one to touch the sky,
One must hit the ground – that and the ender are inspired 🙂
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Thanks Fionn 🙂
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As others have said, these lines are especially amazing:
“Where, for one to touch the sky,
One must hit the ground.”
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I think a lot of relationships have elements of that…
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Only sometimes, not in balance!
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Ah, the good old days of experiencing young, on your way to first (true) love..
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It’s all in there… 🙂
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The wonders of childhood. The imagination nurtured. A writer could be their calling. :o)
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You just never know 😀
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Just beautiful!!
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Thanks Vic!
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I love this, Al. Like others that have commented, the line ..’Where for one to touch the sky one must hit the ground’ is my favourite 🙂
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Thanks Judy ❤
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Mother of dog, that was awesome. You and Antoine de Saint-Exupery, all the way.
“Love does not consist in gazing at each other, but in looking outward together in the same direction.”
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Comment of the day, right there. Thank you! 🙂
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Aw, this is really sweet…and lovely ❤
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❤
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I adore this
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Thank you so much! ❤
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This is lovely❤
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Thank you, Nandini! ❤
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This is beautiful 🙂
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Thank you! 😀
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More than welcome 🙂
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