Stones on river bed
Oblivious to surface
Frothing sturm und drang
Written for: https://ronovanwrites.wordpress.com/2016/08/29/ronovanwrites-weekly-haiku-poetry-prompt-challenge-112-riverstone/
Stones on river bed
Oblivious to surface
Frothing sturm und drang
Written for: https://ronovanwrites.wordpress.com/2016/08/29/ronovanwrites-weekly-haiku-poetry-prompt-challenge-112-riverstone/
Song thrush trills sunset
Bringing down the black curtain
Finally, silence
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Written for : https://ronovanwrites.wordpress.com/2016/01/18/ronovanwrites-weekly-haiku-poetry-prompt-challenge-80-stylefresh/
Each newborn baby;
Crystallisation of hope’s
Cyclical return.
Picture credit: flickr.com/photos/curioustangles/13139150805
Written for: https://ronovanwrites.wordpress.com/2016/01/11/ronovanwrites-weekly-haiku-poetry-prompt-challenge-79-crystalhope/
I thought I’d start the New Year with some positive thoughts 🙂
Life’s ocean is vast.
The way forward is clear:
Just keep paddling.
Picture credit: flickr.com/photos/davidyuweb/7137695529
Calendar moves on.
Fresh resolutions are made.
New year. Old me.
Longing for freedom
Songbird greets the break of day
With hope’s bright chorus
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#1
Beneath the surface
Everyone has charms to find
To those who’re looking
#2
He lacked grace and charm,
Trading on boyish good looks,
He went a long way
#3
Challenge this viewpoint:
No such thing as a charmed life,
Claim those who are rich
#4
Don’t look for a charm
To win the heart of your love
Show her inside yours
Each stolen snowflake,
A sweet moment on the tongue
Lover’s farewell kiss
Ronovan blogged earlier this week about a new form of haiku and free verse, which he’s calling freku. He explains it like this:
By taking a standard poem … and then attempting to sum that poem up in the three lines of a Haiku, you have quite a challenge. It is almost like developing a proverb of an idea.
There is some more information here:Â https://ronovanwrites.wordpress.com/2015/12/08/new-form-of-haiku-poetry/
This is my attempt at this. The above haiku should be read in conjunction with the “magic” poem published earlier today – https://altheauthor.wordpress.com/2015/12/10/magic/Â . I’m fairly happy with both versions, in different ways. The poem allows more depth and narrative around the situation, and the haiku takes a snapshot of the central moment and crystallizes that.
Would love to hear any thoughts that you have on either or both poems 🙂
Photo: flickr.com/photos/reallyterriblephotographer/4839625065
#1
Wolf caked in prey’s blood
Savouring chase’s success,
Staining snow deep red
#2
Some might think it’s cool:
It’s certainly no cakewalk
Being a werewolf!
#3
The Wolf of Wall Street:
He had his cake and ate it…
Comeuppance followed
#4
Creatives beware,
Leeches, wolves and parasites
Will eat up your slice
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