#1
Haiku on my mind.
Haiku on my mind. Curse you!
HAIKU ON MY MIND!
#2
To Ronovan:
Something on your mind?
Specific haiku, perhaps?
Oh well, never mind
#3
Meant to write about
Haiku rules to keep in mind…
Too many to list
#4
Don’t mind the haiku:
Carpet mess of syllables…
It’s not yet house-trained
#5
Please mind the haiku
It often starts out one way
And then …
Banana!
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Hi Al. You have really become excited with Ron’s latest challenge. I like 3 the best. A Japanese friend told me once the most important rule about haiku is there are no rules except maybe 3 lines!!
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I quite agree! It can be fun to play with the different rules at times… Today was for nothing but the joy of it though 🙂
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Banana! 🙂
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It’s always a relief when I hear someone say not to worry so much about the rules (just 3 lines)! Some haiku folks are down right intimidating! My fave line is “carpet mess of syllables”–that is FINE!!
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I’m laughing. Wonderful series of haiku. You are a wonder, Al!
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Aw… 🙂
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Sir, you have run amuck through haiku land. Such a relief!
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I think the comic potential of haiku is under used. I’m trying to redress the balance 🙂
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i liked the last one the best 🙂
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Banana! LOL
Those minions are everywhere!
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Love this! I think I’ll stop here for tonight and go to bed on that high note 🙂
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I’m flattered!
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Ha haHA! It is always such a treat to read whatever you write, That last one had me roaring my head off, it was so true, Mine tend to go off a bit!
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🙂
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Those are great! My favourites are 4 and 5 😊
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I love them all, here is one for you
Haiku! Haiku! Sniff
Echoes like a summer cold
In Japanese mind
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Ha ha, thanks PC!
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Lol. I think after seeing the prompt words this week you have captured how all of our haiku started out. I like how yours ends though… banana! Classic.
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Thank you! I just felt like a bit of fun this week 🙂
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Ah, some comic relief! I very much enjoyed these 🙂
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I think there’s room for comedy within haiku… it can’t all be about the beauty and transcendence of nature!
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I agree, though I find it a challenge to do. I often aimed for Ronovan’s ‘humor’ nod in his post reviews (he did a ‘serious’ one also) but I always fell far short of it. Ah well, I’ll try and try again! You certainly have it nailed 😀
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Thank you!
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I get the banana effect sometimes too, starts off one things ends up another! Thanks for all the entertaining haikus!
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Life’s too short! 🙂
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Ha, ha! You’re hilarious, Al. It seems you felt the same way I did about the prompt words. 😉 I love it. Well done.
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Thanks Vashti. Sometimes the prompts lead me towards something “poetic”… other times… this sort of thing!
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I hear you. It’s the same way for me too. 🙂
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