Your love gives me life
Revitalising my soul
Like water on weeds
Written for TJ’s Household Haiku Challenge – check it out here: https://amaviedecoeurentier.wordpress.com/2015/07/25/tjs-household-haiku-challenge-weeds/
Your love gives me life
Revitalising my soul
Like water on weeds
Written for TJ’s Household Haiku Challenge – check it out here: https://amaviedecoeurentier.wordpress.com/2015/07/25/tjs-household-haiku-challenge-weeds/
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Heh heh…that’s sweetly funny.
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Thanks Teresa. Unusually for me, I hadn’t intended the last line to be humorous, but that works too! 🙂
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Watering the weeds is a good thing. Just think about some of the weeds in the world. The first thing that comes to mine is Marijuana. It started out as a weed. So many of our hybrid plants of today started out that way. So like water on weeds, love does revitalize the soul and beyond.
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Thanks jk. Interesting that both you and Teresa have interpreted it differently, and neither of you matched my “intention”. 17 syllables, and a myriad of interpretations 🙂
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I guess it depended on our focus when reading. 🙂
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Remarkable! 🙂
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😀
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