Ronovan’s haiku prompt words this week were “water” and “Bard”. For my second batch of haiku – see also https://altheauthor.wordpress.com/2015/06/01/haiku-challenge-water-bard-poems/ – I have attempted to “improve” Shakespeare by bending that beautiful iambic pentameter into haiku form…
The Tragedies
To be, or not be
That is the only question
To melt my stone-heart
A woman would run
Through fire and water for
Such a kind, sweet heart
Be not afeard,
The isle’s full of noises.
Weep joyful tears.
The Comedies
Will Neptune’s ocean
Wash this blood clean from my hand?
Apparently not
Is this a dagger
Which I see before me now?
Sorry, my mistake
“When shall we three meet?
In thunder, lightning, or rain?”
“How about sunshine?”
Check out the other entries through Ronovan’s site: https://ronovanwrites.wordpress.com/2015/06/01/ronovanwrites-weekly-haiku-poetry-prompt-challenge-47-water-bard/
Super clever! I’d never thought about bending one form into another.
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Me either until this morning!
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Oh yes, Mr. Bill!
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I’m not entirely sure what Billy would make of my efforts!
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A sonnet or two I would imagine
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Clever!
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Thank you!
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Brilliant stuff, Al. Very clever and orignal.
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Thanks Hugh 🙂
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I was actually working at one point of translating Les Mis into Haiku form. But then I got caught up in other things. A very challenging but rewarding effort, also you learn the nuances of the piece. Think about it. 🙂 You might have a book. Not Les Mis, I claim that one. 🙂
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Could Hamlet be rewritten in haiku? … Hmm…
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🙂 Iambic pentameter is challenging to write, but then to Haiku it up…. 🙂
I’m currently reading a book all written in Iambic pentameter. I really do love Shakespeare. Well done.
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Thanks Serins. After your A to Z Challenge, I was hoping you’d like this one!
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Oh, and I’m loving the new twitter timeline widget you got in here. did not have a chance to take a look earlier in the week. 🙂
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Thanks – that was courtesy of your blog advice! I need to try bloglovin again today, and have some code saved to follow me on FB. It’s all a learning experience for me 🙂
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LOL! I love learning new things, and then sharing them on my blog. 🙂
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Brilliant!
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Thank you, Alka 🙂
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Excellent!
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Thank you so much!
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Your style with words is so different than anything I’ve seen before. Loved it!
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Thank you! I hope you enjoy my other poems too 🙂
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absolutely!
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❤ !
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