The raven with the sleek physique,
Popped the seed into its cheek.
From the seed a pumpkin grew.
The raven coughed it up, and flew
Up, away on broomstick sleek.
It draped itself in night’s mystique,
Searching for the ancient sign –
Golden countenance divine.
Having found this rare antique,
Was carried back within its beak.
The pumpkin, carved to match that face,
Brought living evil to that place.
Pumpkin crept without a creak,
And ate the bird before it shrieked!
So this year to protect your house,
Light a pumpkin candle…
or else!
My fav Halloween piece so far 😉
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Thank you! … Or does that just mean this is the first you’ve read? 😉
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Haha noooo, actually I’ve already read quite a few 😂
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Oh wow! Well, there’s some more coming up over the next couple of days… this is probably the creepiest though 🙂
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Creepy is good, creepy is excellent – write more creepy 😜
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Noted! 😀
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So, so clever and spooky! I love it, Al ❤
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Seemed the right time of year for it 😉
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Indeed 🙂
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Most appropriately wicked… We saw that raven, never more… 🙂
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quoth the Annette… 🙂
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Lovely, Al. I’ve always loved ravens in poetry. Once upon a midnight… etc
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Darkness plus intelligence… a heady mix!
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Ha ha. The poor raven! The pumpkins in my garden aren’t ripe yet, I’d better buy one at the store. Happy Halloween 😈
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We’ve been carving this afternoon… I say “we”… all my wife’s work! 🙂
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That’s one of the fun things about having kids. I’m waiting for the grandson to get a little older. Then we’ll start up again 🙂
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❤
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Ah, such wickedness.
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There is evil afoot… 🙂
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“It draped itself in night’s mystique…” Such a beautiful line.
At first I thought it was very Edgar Allan Poe, but after reading it a couple of times, (yep, I enjoyed it that much) I realised that it was pure Al Lane, i.e wonderful and unique. 🙂
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Blushing here… Thank you ❤
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Ooh! So fun! 😀
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Thank you… Some more silly ones coming up this weekend too 🙂
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Good, because I can’t handle too scary. I’m a wimp! 😄
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What about spiders in disguise, scaring kids and stealing their candy? You know, just as an entirely random example… 😀
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Hmm…as an entirely random example, that sounds ok. Not too scary. 😄 I’m ok with spiders as long as they’re not in the shower with me.
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So they have to wait their turn then? 😉
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Well…if they know what’s good for them! 🕷👞😁
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It’s the only way to be sure! =D>
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Yup. Or fire. 🔥🕷🔥
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Oh, this is just perfect for Halloween Al. Love it 🙂
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Thanks Judy! I keep meaning to write some more limericks too… maybe tomorrow 🙂
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Hope so!!! 😊
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🙂
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Perfect for Halloween, Chloe https://pinkiebag.com
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Thanks Chloe! 🙂
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Oh Al! That was some yumminess! My two fave things… ravens and Halloween 😀 Popping by from Jacqueline’s Halloween party! Hope you have an awesome Halloween!
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Thanks Lori! Hope you have a frightfully good one! 😀
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Thanks Al… so far, it is a frightening wonderful Halloween 😀
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So far, so good!
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Woohooo awesome! 😀
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Oh duly warned Al. 🙂
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Thanks Marje 😀
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I’m going to hide in the closet. 😦
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The closet? The closet? But that’s where the spiders live!!
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Ahh! Okay… bad idea. Where would you suggest I hide?? Oh, I know… under the covers…
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Hmm is that hiding, or something else??
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Yes and yes. 😋
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Haha! Well, fear does get the endorphins pumping…
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Great Halloween poem
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Thanks Betty 🙂
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Very nice. Love this one. It’s Poe-esque.
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Ohhh! I love the EEEVIL 🙂
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Thanks Jacqueline… Can’t beat some seasonal evil! 🙂
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